Feedback on an article

[William Ryan]

I've been working with two of my co-workers on developing a .NET content
site. Anyway, writing an article is a little more difficult than I thought.
How do you make sure you have the important info without boring
non-beginners. How do you write important stuff without turning off
beginners?

Well, I'm posting a sample link of one of my first articles... and would
appreciate any feedback, be it techincal, grammatical or anything else. I'm
really interested in writing, but it's not been my strength (I've had enough
trouble remembering to comment my code and use non-cryptic variable names
;-) )

Anyway, we have a few other articles (about 20 more on the way) but we
really want to make something useful (like www.eggheadcafe.com or
c-sharpcorner.com )

Any and all feedback is appreciated. http://www.knowdotnet.com/testsite/

Thanks again,


Bill

 

[One Handed Man]

Good read Bill.

Now do one on data binding starting from the big picture and working down to
the detail level. I still have trouble with it sometimes and get confused.
Some graphics for mapping the relationships are useful.

HTH



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[William Ryan]

Thank you for your feedback, and yes, I'd love to work on one discussing
binding b/c it a pretty big issue.

Thanks again and I'll post back when I get the next one done.

Bill