Could someone fix a fragment statement?

[Guest]

This is from my resume.

Profile

Commissions Analyst/Accounting Assistant professional with 20 years of
experience, combined with a 3-year history as an Office Administration in a
professional environment and additional experience in Provisioning
Specialist/Buyer, and Account Analyst Expert/AE.

 

[Tom Willett]

sigh.

| This is from my resume.
|
| Profile
|
| Commissions Analyst/Accounting Assistant professional with 20 years of
| experience, combined with a 3-year history as an Office Administration in
a
| professional environment and additional experience in Provisioning
| Specialist/Buyer, and Account Analyst Expert/AE.
|

 

[JoAnn Paules]

Sometimes you have to know when to tell it to ignore once.

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JoAnn Paules
Microsoft MVP - Publisher

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[Guest]

Mango729, since most people simply put bullets in resumes they typically show
up as fragmented sentences - the easiest way to fix it is to remove the
period at the end. However, it is still a fragment. I rewrote your bullet to
make it a sentence that does not trigger the grammar checker, it still says
the same thing you had:
Twenty years experience as a Commissions Analyst/Accounting Assistant
professional combined with a 3-year history as an Office Administration in a
professional environment and additional experience in Provisioning
Specialist/Buyer, and Account Analyst Expert/AE.