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Could someone fix a fragment statement?

 
 
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      1st Jun 2007
This is from my resume.

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Commissions Analyst/Accounting Assistant professional with 20 years of
experience, combined with a 3-year history as an Office Administration in a
professional environment and additional experience in Provisioning
Specialist/Buyer, and Account Analyst Expert/AE.

 
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      1st Jun 2007
sigh.

"mango729" <(E-Mail Removed)> wrote in message
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| This is from my resume.
|
| Profile
|
| Commissions Analyst/Accounting Assistant professional with 20 years of
| experience, combined with a 3-year history as an Office Administration in
a
| professional environment and additional experience in Provisioning
| Specialist/Buyer, and Account Analyst Expert/AE.
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      2nd Jun 2007
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> This is from my resume.
>
> Profile
>
> Commissions Analyst/Accounting Assistant professional with 20 years of
> experience, combined with a 3-year history as an Office Administration in
> a
> professional environment and additional experience in Provisioning
> Specialist/Buyer, and Account Analyst Expert/AE.
>


 
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      2nd Jun 2007
Mango729, since most people simply put bullets in resumes they typically show
up as fragmented sentences - the easiest way to fix it is to remove the
period at the end. However, it is still a fragment. I rewrote your bullet to
make it a sentence that does not trigger the grammar checker, it still says
the same thing you had:
Twenty years experience as a Commissions Analyst/Accounting Assistant
professional combined with a 3-year history as an Office Administration in a
professional environment and additional experience in Provisioning
Specialist/Buyer, and Account Analyst Expert/AE.

"mango729" wrote:

> This is from my resume.
>
> Profile
>
> Commissions Analyst/Accounting Assistant professional with 20 years of
> experience, combined with a 3-year history as an Office Administration in a
> professional environment and additional experience in Provisioning
> Specialist/Buyer, and Account Analyst Expert/AE.
>

 
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